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enough. I must have a motor car. And it was thus   an explosion. There was foam and confusion. The   4
                that I became a novelist — for it is a very strange   imagination had dashed itself against something
                thing that people will give you a motor car if you   hard. The girl was roused from her dream. She           chapter 4
                will tell them a story. It is a still stranger thing   was indeed in a state of the most acute and diffi-
                that there is nothing so delightful in the world as   cult distress. To speak without figure she had
                telling stories. It is far pleasanter than writing   thought of something, something about the body,
                reviews of famous novels. And yet, if I am to   about the passions which it was unfitting for her   Other Voices  /  Virginia Woolf
                obey your secretary and tell you my professional   as a woman to say. Men, her reason told her,
                experiences as a novelist, I must tell you about a   would be shocked. The consciousness of what
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                very strange experience that befell me as a nov-  men will say of a woman who speaks the truth
                elist. And to understand it you must try first to   about her passions had roused her from her art-
                imagine a novelist’s state of mind. I hope I am   ist’s state of unconsciousness. She could write no
                not giving away professional secrets if I say that a   more. The trance was over. Her imagination could
                novelist’s chief desire is to be as unconscious as   work no longer. This I believe to be a very com-
                possible. He has to induce in himself a state of   mon experience with women writers — they are
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                perpetual lethargy. He wants life to proceed with   impeded by the extreme conventionality of the
                the utmost quiet and regularity. He wants to see   other sex. For though men sensibly allow them-
                the same faces, to read the same books, to do the   selves great freedom in these respects, I doubt
                same things day after day, month after month,   that they realize or can control the extreme sever-
                while he is writing, so that nothing may break   ity with which they condemn such freedom in
                the illusion in which he is living — so that noth-  women.
                ing may disturb or disquiet the mysterious nos-  These then were two very genuine experi-  CHECK FOR UNDERSTANDING
                ings about, feelings round, darts, dashes and   ences of my own. These were two of the adven-
                sudden discoveries of that very shy and illusive   tures of my professional life. The first — killing   The experiences W oolf describes in para-
                                                                                            The experiences Woolf describes in para-
                spirit, the imagination. I suspect that this state is   the Angel in the House — I think I solved. She   graph 5 may challenge students. Y ou might
                                                                                            graph 5 may challenge students. You might
                the same both for men and women. Be that as it   died. But the second, telling the truth about my   ask students to divide the paragraph into
                                                                                            ask students to divide the paragraph into
                may, I want you to imagine me writing a novel in   own experiences as a body, I do not think I   three or four sections and to summarize
                                                                                             ee or four sections and to summarize
                                                                                            thr
                                                                                                                         e
                                                                                            each section in two sentences or so. Her
                a state of trance. I want you to figure to your-  solved. I doubt that any woman has solved it yet.   each section in two sentences or so. Here
                                                                                            again they can use the pr
                                                                                                              onouns to guide
                selves a girl sitting with a pen in her hand, which   The obstacles against her are still immensely   again they can use the pronouns to guide
                                                                                            them (the first section in the first person;
                for minutes, and indeed for hours, she never   powerful — and yet they are very difficult to   them (the first section in the first person;
                dips into the inkpot. The image that comes to   define. Outwardly, what is simpler than to write   the next, about novel writing in general,
                                                                                            the next, about novel writing in general,
                                                                                            uses “he”; the following section uses
                my mind when I think of this girl is the image of   books? Outwardly, what obstacles are there for a   uses “he”; the following section uses
                a fisherman lying sunk in dreams on the verge of   woman rather than for a man? Inwardly, I think,   “she”; and the end r etur ns to “I”). Be sur e
                                                                                            “she”; and the end returns to “I”). Be sure
                                                                                                                    ence to
                                                                                            students understand that the r
                                                                                                                 efer
                a deep lake with a rod held out over the water.   the case is very different; she has still many   students understand that the reference to
                                                                                            “the passions which it was unfitting for her
                She was letting her imagination sweep   ghosts to fight, many prejudices to overcome.   “the passions which it was unfitting for her
                                                                                            as a woman to say” is something akin to
                unchecked round every rock and cranny of the   Indeed it will be a long time still, I think, before a   as a woman to say” is something akin to
                                                                                                    e. Y
                                                                                            sexual desir
                                                                                                       ou can then ask students
                world that lies submerged in the depths of our   woman can sit down to write a book without   sexual desire. You can then ask students
                                                                                            if they agree with Woolf’s final claim about
                unconscious being. Now came the experience,   finding a phantom to be slain, a rock to be   if they agr ee with W oolf ’ s final claim about
                                                                                                         ds implicitly imposed on
                                                                                            the double standar
                the experience that I believe to be far commoner   dashed against. And if this is so in literature, the   the double standards implicitly imposed on
                                                                                            women.
                with women writers than with men. The line   freest of all professions for women, how is it in   women.
                raced through the girl’s fingers. Her imagination   the new professions which you are now for the
                had rushed away. It had sought the pools, the   first time entering?
                depths, the dark places where the largest fish   Those are the questions that I should like,
                slumber. And then there was a smash. There was   had I time, to ask you. And indeed, if I have laid
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                    To help students understand Woolf’s overall
                    argument, you could have them examine
                    more closely how she contrasts external
                    and internal obstacles in paragraph 6 and
                    direct students to the final two sentences of
                    the paragraph. After asking them how these
                    sentences articulate Woolf’s conclusion about
                    why it is so difficult for a woman to overcome
                    “the obstacles against her,” students could
                    complete a quickwrite that discusses how
                    this paragraph is significant to the meaning of
                    the essay as a whole.
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