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 AP  TIP  long, which means you can read them several times. Each time you   both luxurious quantity and quality. The expression “a crown of glory,” not the more   1
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 read a passage, you will notice more and more. This section will offer   common “crowning glory,” suggests the mother is royalty, which makes the idea of her
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 unfamiliar words in the AP    ways to deepen your awareness of the specific literary elements   having “foreign blood” sound downright foolish. Further, this is hair that seems to have   chapter 1
 Exam texts. Remember to   authors use to express their ideas. We’ll move from identifying these   a will of its own. Adichie gives it human qualities when she tells us that it “drank” the
 look for context clues that   elements to analyzing their effect on us as readers, and then show   relaxer solution. No wonder strangers wanted to touch it “reverently,” a word we usually   BUILDING CONTEXT
 point to what a word or   you how to approach writing a close analysis essay that shares your   associate with religion or spirituality.
                                                                                            Ask students to brainstorm about the
 phrase means. If you don’t                                                                 Ask students to brainstorm about the
                                                                                            impact of setting details that seem
 find any, consider the overall   insights. For now, though, let’s concentrate on the first impressions   Imagine how different this passage would have been had Adichie simply said that   impact of setting details that seem
 mood of the passage to get   you have when you read a short passage of fiction by taking a look at   Ifemelu had grown up envying her mother’s beautiful hair. The careful choices of details     inconsistent with other parts of the
                                                                                              inconsistent with other parts of the
 the gist of things.  an excerpt from Americanah, a 2013 novel by Chimamanda Ngozi   and the language used to convey them make the difference. That skill — the writer’s    narrative using their choice of books,
                                                                                            narrative using their choice of books,
 Analyzing Short Fiction
 Adichie. The novel tells the story of a young Nigerian woman,   art and craft — is the subject of this section. By paying attention to striking language   movies,  television shows, and so on.
                                                                                            movies,
                                                                                                  television shows, and so on.
 Ifemelu, who emigrates to America to attend college. As you read   choices and asking questions, we have gathered textual evidence to begin interpreting   For example, in horror movies, what is the
                                                                                            For example, in horr
                                                                                                          or movies, what is the
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                                                                                                              e smiling in the
                                                                                            impact of childr
 this passage, pay careful attention to the specific language Adichie uses to set the   the passage. In this case, we see this scene as one that reveals something deeper   impact of children who are smiling in the
                                                                                                       en who ar
                                                                                                          nfield? What is the
 scene and jot down your first impressions. You should also note any unfamiliar   about the relationship between mother and daughter, perhaps one of admiration tinged   Section 2  /  Close Reading: Analyzing Literary Elements and Techniques  middle of a dark cornfield? What is the
                                                                                            middle of a dark cor
                                                                                            significance of a character who appears
 vocabulary, and, if possible, look up words you don’t know. If you are able to work only   with a bit of envy.  significance of a character who appears
                                                                                            unhappy in a pastoral setting?
 with the passage itself, do your best to use the surrounding context to figure out words,   By exploring what catches your attention, you’re already starting to develop a kind   unhappy in a pastoral setting?
 phrases, or usages that confuse you. Finally, try and tune in to the way the language of   of interior conversation with the text that explores what the writer is doing and why. One
 the passage affects you as you read; for instance, do specific words or phrases carry an   important point to keep in mind is that your goal is not simply to identify and list literary
                                                                                            DIFFERENTIA
 emotional meaning? Do they create a certain feeling or atmosphere?  elements — although you may spot and even name some — but to analyze their effect.   DIFFERENTIATION
                                                                                                        TION
                In other words, how do the writer’s choices help craft the meaning of the work? You
                                                                                            Collaborative Learning
                may find the following approaches helpful to keep in mind as you read any text for the   Collaborative Learning
 from Americanah  first time.                                                               Ask students to further explor e points of
                                                                                            Ask students to further explore points of
                                                                                            tension by first dividing students into two
 Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie                                                                   tension by first dividing students into two
                                                                                            lar
                                                                                            large groups. Provide each large group
                                                                                             ge gr
                                                                                                                 ge gr
                                                                                                       ovide each lar
                                                                                                 oups. Pr
                                                                                                                     oup
 Ifemelu had grown up in the shadow of her   would say “Are you from Jamaica?” as though   KEY QUESTIONS  with a value wor d, such as “r esponsibility ,”
                                                                                            with a value word, such as “responsibility,”
 mother’s hair. It was black-black, so thick it drank   only foreign blood could explain such bounteous   Close Reading  and then give the other gr oup a value wor d
                                                                                            and then give the other group a value word
 two containers of relaxer at the salon, so full it   hair that did not thin at the temples. Through the   •  Pose questions about things that confuse you — are there aspects of the setting that   such as “freedom.” Ask each group to
                                                                                                                  oup to
                                                                                            such as “fr
                                                                                                   eedom.” Ask each gr
 took hours under the hooded dryer, and when   years of childhood, Ifemelu would often look in   do not seem to fit with the rest of the narrative? Are characters behaving in ways that   consider the definition of the value wor ds
                                                                                            consider the definition of the value words
                                                                                            and scenarios in which their value word
 finally released from pink plastic rollers, sprang   the mirror and pull at her own hair, separate the   appear unusual, particularly in light of what else the author has revealed about them?  and scenarios in which their value wor d
                                                                                            would be beneficial. Then, have each group
 free and full, flowing down her back like a   coils, will it to become like her mother’s, but it   •  Make connections within the passage or story — where do you spot repetitions,   would be beneficial. Then, have each gr oup
                                                                                            select a representative to present their
 celebration. Her father called it a crown of glory.   remained bristly and grew reluctantly; braiders   patterns, contrasts, or points of tension, especially between and among characters?  select a r epr esentative to pr esent their
                                                                                                   ou may invite discussion about
                                                                                            findings. Y
 “Is it your real hair?” strangers would ask and   said it cut them like a knife.   •  Note striking, unusual, or distinctive word choices — where do the language choices   findings. You may invite discussion about
 then reach out to touch it reverently. Others   2013  signal a change of some sort in the narrative?  a scenario in which both freedom and
                                                                                                              eedom and
                                                                                            a scenario in which both fr
                                                                                            r
                                                                                            responsibility would be ideal.
                                                                                            esponsibility would be ideal.
 You probably noticed, first of all, that the very idea of Ifemelu growing up not simply in
 the shadow of her mother, but “in the shadow of her mother’s hair” is striking. But it’s   Close Reading:
 the description of the hair that tells us why. Instead of just writing “black” or “very
 black” or using another qualifier, Adichie repeats “black-black,” which instantly gains   Analyzing Literary Elements and Techniques
 our attention because of the unusual repetition. This is hair that is “full, flowing down
 [her mother’s] back like a celebration.” That comparison to a celebration — a party, a   The point of close reading is to go from the what to the how by examining details: that
 joyous occasion — gives us a visual image at the same time it evokes the awe that   is, to go beyond merely summarizing what happens or identifying the literary techniques
 Ifemelu feels. This is “bounteous” hair, a word that suggests more than quantity but   the writer employs in a piece of prose. To perform close analysis, we must understand
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