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work. The big flags flying off the back of them   unkempt across their face and necks to affect a   4
                would’ve scared our cattle. The people who drive   laborer’s style for doing laptop work in coffee
                them often live in suburbs and have big, clean   shops, I think of my dad immaculately trimming   DIFFERENTIA TION  chapter 4
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                garages full of all-terrain vehicles that they call   his beard every morning before dawn to work on
                                                                                            Collaborative Learning
                “toys” next to a row of shiny helmets, a very good   a construction site. The men closest to me took   Collaborative Learning
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                option I didn’t have as I drove three-wheelers   meticulous care with their appearance when-  You might ask small groups of students to
                                                                                            ou might ask small gr
                                                                                                            oups of students to
                from one pasture to another with buckets of feed.  ever they had the chance.  Other Voices  /  Sarah Smarsh  examine the opening section of the essay,  ,
                                                                                            examine the opening section of the essay
                  Grandpa would have chuckled at a man with   5  Mom, too, presented herself like her main   paragraphs 1–7, and cr eate a T -chart con-
                                                                                            paragraphs 1–7, and create a T-chart con-
                a cattle guard on the front of his truck driving to   job was to be photographed, when it was more   trasting popular images of country life with
                                                                                            trasting popular images of country life with
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                and from an office job. He would have laughed,   likely to sort the inventory in the stockroom of a   the examples of Smarsh’ s lived experience.
                                                                                            the examples of Smarsh’s lived experience.
                too, about designer jeans yellowed with a wash   retail store. Her outfits were ensembles cobbled   What conclusions about Smarsh’ s purpose
                                                                                            What conclusions about Smarsh’s purpose
                meant to evoke the dirt that was under his fin-  together from Wichita mall sale racks, but she   can they draw from the results?
                                                                                                             esults?
                                                                                            can they draw fr
                                                                                                       om the r
                gernails, or the “shabby chic” decorating trend   always managed to look stylish. My favorite was
                of new furniture meant to look like it had weath-  a champagne-colored silk pantsuit that was cut
                ered decades in our barn.        loose and baggy. She wore it with a scarf that
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                  My family found stuff like that funny rather   had big, lush roses on it like the satiny wallpaper
                than offensive, maybe because it was so poorly   she had glued and smoothed across our hallway.
                executed. When affluent urban men in plaid   She had married a farm boy but had no interest
                flannel shirts let their hair grow wild and   in plaid shirts.
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                                                                                            Connections to T e xt
                                                                                            Connections to Text
                                                                                            Students might be familiar with similar
                                                                                            Students might be familiar with similar
                                                                                            advertisements, either in print or video, and
                                                                                            advertisements, either in print or video, and
                                                                                                                    essions
                                                                                            you might ask them to share impressions
                                                                                            you might ask them to shar
                                                                                                               e impr
                                                                                            of others, or complete a quick sear ch for
                                                                                            of others, or complete a quick search for
                                                                                            some (a sear ch for ads for pick-up trucks
                                                                                            some (a search for ads for pick-up trucks
                                                                                            may yield r
                                                                                                   elevant r
                                                                                                         esults). They could
                                                                                            may yield relevant results). They could
                                                                                            discuss examples that either defend or
                                                                                            discuss examples that either defend or
                                                                                                         s claims.
                                                                                            challenge Smarsh’
                                                                                            challenge Smarsh’s claims.
                  Carefully examine this advertisement for Carhartt, which Sarah Smarsh claims is a “popular
                  workwear brand sometimes worn as a class-conscious fashion statement” (par. 2).
                  How does this advertisement’s portrayal of the brand relate to Smarsh’s argument about
                  “what it means to be country” (par. 1)?
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