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from The Round House  To find solid evidence, you will have to rely on your observations,   AP  TIP  1
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                find portions of the work that seem significant, and then explain why
 Louise Erdrich  and how you think they are meaningful. Sometimes this process   Try to use language that                    chapter 1
                                                               conveys certainty in your
                happens naturally as you reflect on a story you immediately   claims. Instead of writing,
 Small trees had attacked my parents’ house at   convenient holes in the mortar for next year’s
 the foundation. They were just seedlings with   seedlings.  connected with and enjoyed, but sometimes a work of literature can   “I think the daughter in ‘The
                                                               First Day’ finds it ironic. . . ”
 one or two rigid, healthy leaves. Nevertheless,   Whenever I succeeded in working loose a tiny   seem like it’s just a wall of words you have to climb. In such   or even, “The daughter
 the stalky shoots had managed to squeeze   tree, I placed it like a trophy beside me on the   situations, the basic elements of fiction are tools you can use to    seems to find it ironic . . .”
 through knife cracks in the decorative brown   narrow sidewalk that surrounded the house.   make the ascent. This approach to developing an interpretation is   you might instead write,
 shingles covering the cement blocks. They had   There were ash shoots, elm, maple, box elder,   relatively systematic, but it will always get you where you need to go.   “The daughter in ‘The First
 Analyzing Short Fiction
 grown into the unseen wall and it was difficult to   even a good-sized catalpa, which my father placed   Let’s look at how you might go element by element in “The First Day”   Day’ finds it ironic. . . .”
 pry them loose. My father wiped his palm across   in an ice cream bucket and watered, thinking that   by Edward P. Jones to develop your interpretation of the story.
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 his forehead and damned their toughness. I was   he might find a place to replant it. I thought it was   Let’s start with character. Who are the characters in this story? The main characters
 using a rusted old dandelion fork with a   a wonder the treelets had persisted through a   are the mother and the daughter. All of the other characters are female — where are    Section 1  /  Putting It All Together: Interpreting Major Elements of Fiction
 splintered handle; he wielded a long, slim iron   North Dakota winter. They’d had water perhaps,   the men in this story? Their absence could speak to the importance and complexity
 fireplace poker that was probably doing more   but only feeble light and a few crumbs of earth. Yet   of women’s relationships with each other, particularly mothers and daughters.
 harm than good. As my father prodded away   each seed had managed to sink the hasp of a root   What else do you know about the protagonist of the story, the daughter? How does
 blindly at the places where he sensed roots   deep and a probing tendril outward.   she change or develop because of the action in the plot? Consider, for example, the
 might have penetrated, he was surely making   2012  title of the text: “The First Day.” We can ask, “The first day of what?” Literally, it’s the
                first day of school, but what else does this day signify? The daughter is leaving her
                family and entering society as a whole. It’s the first day that her education and her
 Putting It All Together:    fate are being transferred from her mother to the adults at the school, who are minor    DIFFERENTIATION
                but important characters in this story. These observations suggest a number of
 Interpreting Major Elements of Fiction  interpretations, especially the importance of community in raising a child.  Connections to World
                  The setting of the story also offers opportunities for interpretation. In our earlier
 As you analyze literature, you have not only the challenge of comprehending what   discussion of setting, we focused on what the neighborhood reveals about the lives of the   Consider this statement: “These
                                                                                            observations suggest a number of
 happens in the story but also of understanding how characters, plot, setting, point of   narrator and her mother, as well as what significance the mother’s church holds as a symbol   interpretations [about “The First Day”],
 view, and perspective come together to raise questions, explore issues, and ultimately   of community. But the setting also speaks to the mother’s anxiety about letting her daughter   especially the importance of community
 convey meaning. When you put forth your understanding of the text, you are making a   go and the daughter’s readiness to have new experiences on her own. This creates a bit of   in raising a child.” Brainstorm about other
 claim about its deeper meaning, or theme(s). A claim must be arguable, which is    tension in the story: while the mother sees the school near the church as an extension of a   possible interpretations by creating a
 where your interpretation will come in. If the plot, characters, and setting are the what    community she trusts to protect her daughter, the fact that it’s familiar ground might   research question that considers the extent
 of a story, then your interpretation is the so what. Developing an interpretation is not    ultimately limit the daughter’s opportunities to establish herself on her own terms.   of the impact of outside factors. Instead of
 a simple process, and you might even feel as though you have to make it up by using   Regardless of which school the daughter attends, the general setting of schools also   “Why is it important that a community help
 your imagination — but that’s not necessarily a bad thing. In fact, literary critic Northrop   reinforces our earlier interpretation of the roles wider communities play in raising children.  raise a child?” ask “To what extent does
 Frye used the term “the educated imagination” to describe the intersection of skills and   The plot of the story is pretty straightforward: an illiterate mother takes her daughter to   the involvement of a community positively
 knowledge with creativity. In a way, this chapter so far has educated your imagination —     the first day of kindergarten; they are refused admission to one school and have to go to   or negatively impact a child’s confidence?”
 what you’ve learned about the basic building blocks of stories such as character, pers pec-   another, where another parent assists the mother in filling out the necessary forms. The   Brainstorm about other possible themes,
 tive, point of view, plot, and setting all give you ways to exercise your imagination as   mother then leaves the daughter at school, telling her to pay close attention to the teacher.   and then develop additional thematic
 you think about what these stories mean. The complexity of this process of inter-   That basic sequence of events is a summary of the plot, but an interpretation of it requires   questions.
 pretation means that while others may develop similar interpretations, yours is still   a deeper exploration that moves beyond what happens and looks at how the order of
 unique. That is why you will also need to provide evidence from the text to back the   events and the overall structure of the story communicate meaning. Within the plot of “The
 claims you make as you explain and support your interpretation. All of these pieces,   First Day,” some of the events take on deeper significance as we re-examine them. For
 when put together, essentially form a literary argument.  instance, why would a mother who has not had the opportunity to receive a formal
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                    In “The First Day,” some of the events take on
                    deeper significance upon  reexamination. You
                    may ask students to use a narrative structure,
                    such as Joseph Campbell’s archetypal hero’s
                    journey, fairy tale archetypal structure, or
                    established short story structures to suggest
                    further relationships between a plot point and
                    the narrator’s emotional attitude or motiva-
                    tion. For  example, in Campbell’s archetype,
                    the home culture is connected to lack of
                    awareness.










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