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                some frightened, armed person in a foyer some-
                some frightened, armed person in a foyer some-  standard unpleasantries with police, doormen,
                where, or make an errant move after being   bouncers, cabdrivers, and others whose busi-                     chapter 4
                where, or make an errant move after being
                pulled over by a policeman. Where fear and
                pulled over by a policeman. Where fear and   ness is to screen out troublesome individuals
                weapons meet—and they often do in urban
                weapons meet — and they often do in urban   before there is any nastiness.
                  America — there is always the possibility of death.
                America—there is always the possibility of death.  I moved to New York nearly two years ago
                  In that first year, my first away from my   and I have remained an avid night walker. In   Other Voices  /  Brent Staples
                hometown, I was to become thoroughly familiar   central Manhattan, the near-constant crowd
                with the language of fear. At dark, shadowy   cover minimizes tense one-on-one street   CHECK FOR UNDERSTANDING
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                intersections in Chicago, I could cross in front of   encounters. Elsewhere — visiting friends in
                                                                                            You might ask students to discuss what
                a car stopped at a traffic light and elicit the   Soho, where sidewalks are narrow and tightly   Y ou might ask students to discuss what
                                                                                            Staples means by “the language of fear”
                thunk, thunk, thunk, thunk of the driver — black,   spaced buildings shut out the sky — things can   Staples means by “the language of fear”
                                                                                              . 3). He understands the signs of fear in
                                                                                            (par. 3). He understands the signs of fear in
                                                                                            (par
                white, male, or female — hammering down the   get very taut indeed.         other people, caused by his presence. You
                                                                                                                 esence. Y
                                                                                                                        ou
                                                                                            other people, caused by his pr
                door locks. On less traveled streets after dark,   Black men have a firm place in New York   5  might ask them to discuss the extent to
                                                                                            might ask them to discuss the extent to
                I grew accustomed to but never comfortable   mugging literature. Norman Podhoretz in his   which the “fear” is in others as opposed to
                                                                                            which the “fear” is in others as opposed to
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                with people who crossed to the other side of the   famed (or infamous) 1963 essay, “My Negro
                                                                                            in himself, and use the text to support their
                                                                                            in himself, and use the text to support their
                                                                                            answers.
                                                                                            answers.
                                                                                            DIFFERENTIA
                                                                                            DIFFERENTIATION
                                                                                                        TION
                                                                                            Connections to T e xt
                                                                                            Connections to Text
                                                                                                               elcome to Fear
                                                                                            A 1975 pamphlet called “W
                                                                                            A 1975 pamphlet called “Welcome to Fear
                                                                                            City” and distributed by New Y ork City
                                                                                            City” and distributed by New York City
                                                                                            police suggested guidelines for surviving
                                                                                            police suggested guidelines for surviving
                                                                                            NYC. Cr
                                                                                                 eated by the Council for Public
                                                                                            NYC. Created by the Council for Public
                                                                                            Safety, the pamphlet did not point overtly
                                                                                            Safety , the pamphlet did not point overtly
                                                                                            to any connection between Black men and
                                                                                            to any connection between Black men and
                                                                                            crime, but it certainly would not have
                                                                                            crime, but it certainly would not have
                                                                         KEREM YUCEL/AFP/Getty Images  retz writes nor the “quick-hunch posture”
                                                                                            helped the “nervousness” of which Podho-
                                                                                            helped the “nervousness” of which Podho-
                                                                                            etz writes nor the “quick-hunch postur
                                                                                                                       e”
                                                                                            r
                                                                                            Hoagland identifies. Images of the pam-
                                                                                            Hoagland identifies. Images of the pam-
                                                                                            phlet ar
                                                                                            phlet are readily available online, so you
                                                                                                   eadily available online, so you
                                                                                                 e r
                                                                                            could have students look it up to give them
                                                                                            could have students look it up to give them
                                                                                            a better idea of what Staples is explaining
                                                                                            in paragraph 5.
                                                                                            in paragraph 5.
                  Flowers, signs, and balloons were left near a makeshift memorial to George Floyd close to the   a better idea of what Staples is explaining
                  spot in Minneapolis where he died at the hands of a white police officer who knelt on his neck
                  for more than eight minutes in May 2020. Demonstrations were held across the country to
                  protest police brutality and systemic racism against Black people in America.
                  How does this image serve as evidence for Staples’s argument? What changes does it
                  suggest have occurred since Staples first wrote “Just Walk on By”?
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