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                                                                                            Collaborative Learning
                                                                                            Collaborative Learning
                                                                                            ou might ask students to contemplate
                                                                                            Y
                                                                                            You might ask students to contemplate
                                   Thearon W. Henderson/Getty Images           Bryn Lennon/Getty Images  cusses his “Blackness.” You could give
                                                                                            Morris’
                                                                                            Morris’s tone in paragraph 12, when he dis-
                                                                                                s tone in paragraph 12, when he dis-
                                                                                            cusses his “Blackness.” Y
                                                                                                              ou could give
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                                                                                            students a list of possibilities, and ask them
                                                                                            students a list of possibilities, and ask them
                                                                                            to choose one or two that the text sup-
                                                                                            to choose one or two that the text sup-
                                                                                     Other Voices  /  Wesley Morris
                                                                                            ports. Some possibilities: apologetic, con-
                                                                                            ports. Some possibilities: apologetic, con-
                                                          AP Photo/File
                                                                                            templative, defensive, pragmatic, r
                                                                                                                    ealistic,
                                                                                            templative, defensive, pragmatic, realistic,
                                                                                            self-ef
                                                                                            self-effacing, self-critical. You might give
                                                                                                               ou might give
                                                                                                facing, self-critical. Y
                                                                                            them the option of choosing two, or joining
                                                                                            them the option of choosing two, or joining
                  In the photo on the right, taken in August 2020, British Formula 1 driver Sir Lewis Hamilton kneels and
                                                                                            two with a qualifier
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                                                                                                           ou might also have
                                                                                                         . (Y
                  raises his arm in the Black Power salute. His body posture echoes former NFL player Colin Kaepernick,   two with a qualifier. (You might also have
                                                                                            them think about the rhetorical situation:
                  known for kneeling during the national anthem to protest police brutality, as in the 2016 photo on the left.   them think about the rhetorical situation:
                  It also harkens to the 1968 Olympics, in which medalists Tommie Smith and John Carlos raised their fists   students might see his tone differently if
                                                                                                                   ently if
                                                                                            students might see his tone dif
                                                                                                                  fer
                  during the national anthem while on the podium (shown in the center photo).  they think about audiences of dif fer ent
                                                                                            they think about audiences of different
                  What do each of these photos have in common? How can the actions of prominent figures be   races.) It’s an important paragraph in the
                                                                                            races.) It’
                                                                                                  s an important paragraph in the
                  interpreted as “weaponry” in the way that Morris suggests in this essay?
                                                                                                            s identity
                                                                                            development of Morris’
                                                                                            development of Morris’s identity. .
                I had never done a Black-power salute. It always   the house he no longer lived in and spanked me   DIFFERENTIATION
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                seemed like more Blackness than I’ve needed,   (a first, for us both). Then he calmly walked me
                                                                                            Scaffolding
                maybe more than I had. I’m not Black-power   to school. On the way, he explained, with   Scaffolding
                Black. I’ve always been milder, more apprehen-  uncharacteristic gravity, that because I was   You could use these photos in relation to
                                                                                            Y
                                                                                                                  elation to
                                                                                            ou could use these photos in r
                sive than that. I was practically born with a   Black, I needed to be very careful about my   the synthesis prompts in Chapter 3, both
                                                                                                       ompts in Chapter 3, both
                                                                                            the synthesis pr
                mustache.                        behavior. Nobody should steal. And we espe-  for Celebrity Activism (p. 130) and Freedom
                                                                                            for Celebrity Activism (p. 130) and Fr
                                                                                                                      eedom
                  I grew up in Philadelphia in the 1980s. My   cially shouldn’t. He was a track coach, and that   of Speech (p. 157). If you have done them
                                                                                            of Speech (p. 157). If you have done them
                mother left my father when my sister and I were   was one of the few times he ever coached me.  already, you could refer students back to
                                                                                             eady
                                                                                                 , you could r
                                                                                                          efer students back to
                                                                                            alr
                small. I took the divorce just fine. Except for the   It’s perhaps absurd to point to one child-  them and ask how they might be used as
                                                                                            them and ask how they might be used as
                stealing. I used to pluck quarters from my moth-  hood incident and declare it decisive, but I’ve   sources in those conversations, or you
                                                                                            sour
                                                                                               ces in those conversations, or you
                er’s change purse and, before class, feed them to   always found that story useful. It’s rich in disap-  could use those prompts now, in relation to
                                                                                                                 , in r
                                                                                                         ompts now
                                                                                            could use those pr
                                                                                                                    elation to
                the arcade consoles at the 7-Eleven near school.   pointment, embarrassment, shame and guilt   a discussion of the signs and signifiers of
                                                                                            a discussion of the signs and signifiers of
                First, though, I would discreetly jam handfuls of   (my mother needed those quarters; they were   protest.
                                                                                            pr
                                                                                             otest.
                1-cent candy into my pockets. The quarters    carfare; and the kids at school now knew I was a
                were never meant to cover that. For two weeks    thief). I was so ashamed that I vowed, at 6, that I
                in the second grade, this is how my mornings   never wanted to feel like that again. I’d had a
                began — until I got caught. The store manager   moral near-death experience. From there on, I
                called my mother, and in the uncomfortably   would be good. That was the vow.
                long wait for her arrival, I sat there, wallowing in   “Good” meant trying hard and helping out   15
                regret. But she never showed. My father did. She   and listening and being a devoted friend. It
                must have phoned him. He walked me home to   meant only the best news for my parents and
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                    Connections to Text                 Connections to Self
                    In paragraph 13, Morris alludes to “the talk”   You might have students respond to Morris’s
                    he received from his father, something which   claims about “goodness” in paragraph 15.
                    Brent Staples discusses in his essay earlier in   You could ask them whether their own expe-
                    this chapter. If students have read Staples’s   rience of school culture supports the follow-
                    essay, you might ask them to compare Mor-  ing claim: “[G]oodness as a personal policy is
                    ris’s response to his father’s talk to Staples’s   strange for a child to have. It’s for grown-ups;
                    responses to his new understanding of the   not for kids. Teachers like good kids; some
                    realities of systemic racism at the end of his   teachers prefer them. The kind of goodness
                    essay. The connections between the essays   I’m talking about is suspicious to other kids.
                    are strong in paragraphs 23–24, too, when   Kids don’t want to catch you abstaining from
                    Morris discusses his fear of being shot.  trouble or raising your hand or staying behind
                                                        after school to help out or, worse, to hang.”
                                                        They might answer in a short journal essay or
                                                        in a short debate or, to make it more formal,
                                                        you could ask them to define “goodness”
                                                        and then develop a full essay.
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