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                                                                                             I am in Odessa, Father. It is 2018, 25 years
                                                                                             I am in Odessa, Father. It is 2018, 25 years
                                                                                          after we left this city. I come back here so that I
                                                                                          after we left this city. I come back here so that I
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                                                                                          can turn off my hearing aids and stop time. I put
                                                                                          can turn off my hearing aids and stop time. I put
                                                                                        ©Graywolf Press. Cover design by Kapo Ng. Cover art by Gail Schneider.  I take my hands off the wall — nothing. Hands   75
                                                                                          my hands to the wall—and hear the sound of
                                                                                          my hands to the wall — and hear the sound of
                                                                                          taxis stopping at the lights, the whooshing of
                                                                                          taxis stopping at the lights, the whooshing of
                                                                                          trolleys, the women arguing on the street corner.
                                                                                          trolleys, the women arguing on the street corner.
                                                                                          I take my hands off the wall—nothing. Hands
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                                                                                          to the wall — a dog barks, a siren rises in the
                                                                                          to the wall—a dog barks, a siren rises in the
                                                                                          avenue. Hands off the wall—nothing.
                                                                                            avenue. Hands off the wall — nothing.
                                                                                             It is 1993 again. Silence doesn’t subscribe to
                                                                                             It is 1993 again. Silence doesn’t subscribe to
                                                                                          the concept of time. . . .
                                                                                          the concept of time. . . .
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                                                                                          because my parents can never come back. I
                                                                                          because my parents can never come back. I
                                                                                          make it to this city so Mother can again march at
                                                                                          make it to this city so Mother can again march at
               DIFFERENTIATION                             This is the cover of Kaminsky’s 2019 book    street to anyone—it is too intimate. I come here
                                                                                          the end of the column of sailors, as my father
                                                                                          the end of the column of sailors, as my father
                                                                                          salutes.
                                                           Deaf Republic. The poems in the book take place   salutes.
               Connections to Text                         in an unnamed country under military occupation.   Your ears aren’t empty, Mother used to say,
                                                                                             Your ears aren’t empty, Mother used to say,
                                                                                          they are open.
               Kaminsky has used the statement “Silence    At the beginning of the book, soldiers kill a   they are open.
               is the invention of the hearing” in several   deaf boy and immediately after the citizens of   I have no one to whom I can explain what
                                                                                             I have no one to whom I can explain what
                                                           the country become deaf in protest. They
               contexts: here, in paragraph 71; in an      communicate and plan their resistance in sign   happens when I finally turn my hearing aids
                                                                                          happens when I finally turn my hearing aids
               annotation within his poetry collection Deaf   language.                   on—now the tremble of the inner ear is relent-
                                                                                          on — now the tremble of the inner ear is relent-
               Republic (there’s a multimedia version of   What themes does this cover image convey?   less. The brain is taught: This is the shuffle of
                                                                                          less. The brain is taught: This is the shuffle of
               some of the poems on the New Yorker’s       What aspects of Kaminsky’s argument does it   your own feet. This is the voice of your hotel
                                                                                          your own feet. This is the voice of your hotel
               site); in an interview with the Guardian    support?                       neighbor speaking in the other room as it
                                                                                          neighbor speaking in the other room as it
               called “‘I will never hear my father’s voice’:                             vibrates through the walls. When I turn the
                                                                                          vibrates through the walls. When I turn the
               Ilya Kaminsky on deafness and escaping                                     hearing aids on in these streets, my parents are
                                                                                          hearing aids on in these streets, my parents are
                                                         not believe in silence. Silence is the invention of
               the Soviet Union”; in a tweet about the   not b elie v e in s ilence . S ilence is the in v en tion of   dead again. So, I turn them off.
                                                                                          dead again. So, I turn them off.
                                                         the hearing.
               Russian invasion of Ukraine on February   the hearing.                        Here I see us: In the afternoon, we are walk- -
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               28, 2022. Students could examine the      •                                ing down Pushkinskaya Street with our heavy
                                                                                          ing down Pushkinskaya Street with our heavy
               statement in those four contexts and create                                suitcases, we are headed toward the train sta-
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                                                                                          tion. It is the 14th of January, 1993. It’s snowing.
               ping and separate meanings. For another   at the cemetery. I watch my father’s lips circle   The trolleys and cabs aren’t functioning. We are
                                                         at the cemetery. I watch my father’s lips circle
                                                                                          The trolleys and cabs aren’t functioning. We are
               view, you could have students read Sara   the silence of his goodbye as he kneels before   dragging our suitcases across the city to the
                                                         the silence of his goodbye as he kneels before
                                                                                          dragging our suitcases across the city to the
               Novic’s reflection “Silence Brought Me a   Shura’s grave. Goodbye, my dear. I am leaving.   train, saying good morning to this city for one
                                                         Shura’s grave. Goodbye, my dear. I am leaving.
                                                                                          train, saying good morning to this city for one
               Community and Escape” (July 19, 2022):    I am going away to give my boy a future.  last time, Victor and Ella Kaminsky and
                                                         I am going away to give my boy a future.
                                                                                          last time, Victor and Ella Kaminsky and
               she comments on Kaminsky’s lines and her     It is snowing. It is 1993. I watch my father’s   their son.
                                                            It is snowing. It is 1993. I watch my father’s
                                                                                          their son.
               experience of deafness.                   lips whisper to the gravestone: Our postman,                2018
                                                         lips whisper to the gravestone: Our postman,
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                                                 AP  Teaching Tip. You might have students   and stop time” and “Your ears aren’t empty,
                                                 examine the last two sections and consider   Mother used to say, they are open” and ask
                                                 their function as a conclusion to the essay.   them to discuss the connections between
                                                 The sections are layered and complex, but   the two. Their conclusions here might not be
                                                 they synthesize many threads. You could   definitive, but they will probably raise fruitful
                                                 ask students to reread the final two sections,   questions for class discussion. You can also
                                                 starting at paragraph 72, and highlight in   ask your students how the last two sections
                                                 different colors references to silence/deaf-  respond to the question in paragraph 17,
                                                 ness, to the past, and to the present. Then,   “What is it I am trying to recall?” This work
                                                 direct them to the statements “I come back   will reinforce the Unit 4 CED focus on the
                                                 here so that I can turn off my hearing aids   functions of conclusions (RHS-1.J).
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