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190  Unit 2   ■   Analyzing Comparisons and Representations  Composition Workshop   ■   Writing about Tone  191                UNIT 2


                     ® SKILLS
                   AP             LITERARY ARGUMENTATION                                         TRM Graphic Organizer: Explaining the
                                                                                                     Relevance of the Idea
                       PRACTICE   Explaining the Relevance of the Idea                  COMPOSITION WORKSHOP
                   When you have completed your final body paragraph, add a sentence or two at
                   the end of your argument in which you explain the relevance of the unifying idea
                   in your thesis.
 Relevant Evidence:  Relevant Evidence:  Relevant Evidence:
                                    Explaining Relevance
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                   Unifying idea:


                   Relevance of the idea:
 Commentary  Commentary  Commentary
 (Link the evidence to   (Link the evidence to   (Link the evidence to
 your thesis by explaining  your thesis by explaining  your thesis by explaining
 its significance in   its significance in   its significance in
 relation to the claim in   relation to the claim in   relation to the claim in
 your thesis):  your thesis):  your thesis):  Revise Your Argument                                INSTRUCTIONAL FOCUS
                 In Unit 1, you learned to revise your literary argument by examining your the-  Revise Your Argument
                 sis and topic sentences to make sure that they are unified by an idea and that   Student writers and peer editors should examine
                 they convey an insight. Also, you learned to examine your evidence to ensure   the precision of the word choices that identify the
                 that it is relevant to the line of reasoning that you have established to support   tone of the text. Additionally, they should check
                 your thesis.                                                                   the logic of the connection between the idea and
                    For your tone analysis, locate the adjectives that you have included to describe
 Note: Your argument should include the number of reasons necessary to justify   tone within the work. Review the following questions related to your treatment of   insight in the thesis statement and the reasons
 your claim. These organizers are illustrative of three reasons. Your argument may   tone in your literary argument. Revise your draft if your answer is “no” to any of   established in the line of reasoning.
 include more or fewer.  the following questions:
                   •  Are your tone words precise?
                   •  Does your textual evidence exemplify the tone(s) that you have identified?
 Contextualize Your Argument  •  Have you identified the author’s techniques that create the tone?
 To conclude your literary argument, you need to include a final statement that not   •  Does your textual evidence include elements to support the techniques?
 only reflects back on your interpretation but also explains the relevance of your   •  Does your interpretation of the work logically align with the tone(s) that
 idea. Often, the interpretation that guides your thesis statement is based on the   you identified?
 specific details in the text. This final statement will be slightly different.  Distributed by Bedford, Freeman & Worth Publishers. Strictly for use with its products. Not for redistribution.
 When you explain the significance of the idea at the end of your literary argu-
 ment, you broaden the scope of your interpretation beyond the text that you are
 analyzing. In future workshops, you will continue to explore ways to contextualize
 your argument. To begin, consider the following questions:
 •  What does the reader discover about the idea from reading the text?
 •  How is this idea relevant beyond the pages of the text?








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