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                                                                  In the last stanzas, the tone shifts from jovial to judgmental as the   topic sentence: loss
                                                                young girl enters the confines of her home and is questioned by her   of freedom signified by
                                                                mother, representing the societal norms of being well-behaved girls and   tone shift from playful
                                                                women have to follow. As she walks into the house, her carefree nature   to reserved
                                                                already dissipates. As she notices the “clean linoleum,” she “smoothed
                                                                her skirt”: a gesture that contrasts with the dirty and playful tone from
                                                                outside, instead shifting into a stricter environment inside. In this new
                                                                  environment, she adjusts accordingly to please others by fixing her
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                                                                                                                  evidence: details and
                                                                  clothing. She leaves behind the windblown hair and rumpled clothing
                                                                that represent her  freedom outside to look better adjusted for her mother   word choice illustrate
                                                                                                                  the loss of freedom
                                                                and others. She is berated by her mother with questions about her time   experienced within the
                                                                outside. Her mother represents the judgment and questioning women   rules of society
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                                                                often get by others when acting against the societal norms of a perfect,
                                                                well- mannered lady. The little girl is carefree and playful, just like a child
                                                                should be, but in this new environment she is more reserved and
                                                                  obedient to please and  conform to those standards of women even as a
                                                                child. When her mother asks about what is in her pocket she answers
                                                                obediently that it is her knife and notices how it “weighted [her] pocket
                                                                and stretched [her] dress awry.” This object associated with her brother
                                                                and the playful  rambunctious nature of boys, the knife, is weighing on
                                                                her as she tries her hardest to conform to the perfect little girl her mother
                                                                expects and wants. The knife also messes up her dress, showing how
                                                                this object that represents her freedom from outside is messing with the
                                                                mask she is putting on with orderly clothing and hair. It instead rumples
                                                                her dress and depicts her true nature as a playful child, but her mother’s
                                                                judging eyes do not accept that, so the little girl conforms to the
                                                                well-mannered stereotype that society wants her to be, instead of being
                                                                her true self. The tone shift contrasts the freedom she feels playing out-
                                                                side as a horse with her mother’s questioning and  judgment.
                                                                  In Swenson’s poem “The Centaur,” the speaker depicts the societal
                                                                pressures placed on girls to be obedient and well-mannered. She uses   conclusion: articulates
                                                                                                                  the desire for freedom
                                                                metaphors and similes to create a tonal shift from the carefree indepen-  from societal pressures
                                                                dence of a child playing outside alone to the constraints and judgments
                                                                of social expectations.

















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