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               19   CONTRAST  Despite spending so much time   495  for Violet’s, pronouncing their approval of   and ask if she wanted to hang out over the
               and energy being able to discuss figures in      her “thickness” with grunts, smiles, and by   weekend, “like at the mall or something,
               popular culture, Fatima prefers what she was     looking directly at her butt — when her   see a movie?”
               already authentically interested in (alternative   mother said, “You got a phone call, from    Fatima counted to twelve, as per the rules
               culture).                                        a boy.”                         540  (the universal ones, not just Violet’s) and
                                                              500  It couldn’t be one of the boys from theater   said, “Yeah, that’d be cool.” She almost left
               20   TENSION  Referring back to the imagery      already; that would make anyone look   the “l” off the end of the word, but caught
               of Fatima’s different colored lips, the narrator     desperate.                     herself. “Which mall?”
               reveals that Fatima (out of anxiety, fear,         “Who is Rolf?” her mother smiled, “and   “Where else?” Rolf said. “The Montclair
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               insecurity, or otherwise) decides to keep        why didn’t you mention him before?”  545  Plaza.”
               information about Rolf from Violet, though     505  Fatima nearly floated up to her bedroom.   This would be her first date, and though
                                                                                                     This would be her first date, and though
               there is no reason to believe Violet would react   She thought about calling Violet but called   20  that was the kind of thing to share with a
                                                                                                   that was the kind of thing to share with a
               negatively to what Fatima knows is good news.    Rolf back instead, waiting the appropriate   best friend, especially one with more experi-
                                                                                                   best friend, especially one with more experi-
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               Some may interpret this tension as it is easier for   hour she had rehearsed with Violet for a   ence, Fatima felt — in some deep way that
                                                                                                   ence, Fatima felt—in some deep way that
               Fatima to use Violet to achieve a goal than for her   hypothetical situation such as this.  550 hurt her stomach—that Violet didn’t need to
                                                                                                   hurt her stomach — that Violet didn’t need to
               to actually be friends with Violet.
                                                                  By now, and with some authenticity,
                                                                                                   know about Rolf, not yet at least. She would
                                                              510  By now, and with some authenticity,   know about Rolf, not yet at least. She would
                                                                Fatima could intone the accent marks in
                                                                                                   keep her lips glossed and parted, her two
                                                              19  Fatima could intone the accent marks in   keep her lips glossed and parted, her two
                                                                places they hadn’t been before, recite all the   worlds separate.
                                                                                                   worlds separate.
                                                                places they hadn’t been before, recite all the
                                                                names of all the members of Cash Money,
                                                                names of all the members of Cash Money,
                                                                Bad Boy, No Limit, Wu-Tang, Boyz II Men,
                                                                Bad Boy, No Limit, Wu-Tang, Boyz II Men,         • • •
                                                                ABC, BBD, ODB, LDB, TLC, B.I.G., P-O, P-P-A,
                                                              515 ABC, BBD, ODB, LDB, TLC, B.I.G., P-O, P-P-A,   The week leading up to the date, Fatima tried
                                                                Ronny, Bobby, Ricky, Mike, Johnny, Ralph,   555  to play extra cool, asking Violet more ques-
                                                                Ronny, Bobby, Ricky, Mike, Johnny, Ralph,
                                                                Tony, Toni, and Tone, if she wanted. But when   tions than usual when they spoke on the
                                                                Tony, Toni, and Tone, if she wanted. But when
                                                                she called Rolf, all they talked about were   phone. Neither of the guys from the movie
                                                                she called Rolf, all they talked about were
                                                                skateboards and the Smiths, in whose music
                                                                skateboards and the Smiths, in whose music   theater had called Fatima, but one of Violet’s
                                                              520 Fatima had dabbled before Violet.  three had asked Violet out, and she was
                                                                Fatima had dabbled before Violet.
                                                                  “The Smiths are way better than Morrissey,”   560    “letting him stew for a while before I let him
                                                                Rolf said. His voice was nasal but deep.   know. Anyway, we’re supposed to check out
                                                                Fatima imagined that he was at least 6’7,   Rush Hour this weekend.”
                                                                though she hadn’t stood next to him yet.   “This weekend?” Fatima said.
                                                              525  When she did, he was 6’1.         “This weekend.”
                                                                  “You can barely tell the difference since   565  “I told my parents I would babysit this
                                                                Morrissey’s voice is so overpowering,” she   weekend, I forgot,” Fatima lied, feeling a bit
                                                                said with her pink lip.            like a grease stain on a silk shirt.
                                                                  “No, but The Smiths’ stuff is way darker,”   “Since when?” Violet pushed.
                                                              530  Rolf said. “You should hear the first album.   “We can go next weekend, or during
                                                                Then you’ll get it. I’ve got it on vinyl.”  570  the week,” Fatima said, and changed the
                                                                  “Okay,” Fatima waited.           subject.
                                                                  She noticed that he didn’t invite her   Before they got off the phone, Violet said,
                                                                over to listen or offer to lend her the   “I guess I’ll call Mike back then, and tell him
                                                              535  album, but he did call back two days later   I’m free after all.”
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                                                     CREATIVE WRITING
                                                     Search for Identity
                                                     The teenage years are spent establishing an
                                                     identity. This story by Nafissa Thompson-Spires
                                                     reveals the difficulty of doing this. Ask your
                                                     students to think of a friend they made who
                                                     challenged their views and taught them a
                                                     different perspective on life. How did this new
                                                     and different friend fit into the pattern of their
                                                     lives at that point? What conflicts might arise
                                                     from having friends from different “cliques” or
                                                     groups? After a discussion, ask students to write
                                                     a letter from Fatima to Violet explaining what
                                                     happened at the cinema.



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